Responses to Nifty Stories-Gay Erotic Story Archive
These are readers’ responses to stories we have published on the Nifty
Re. “Tommy Grows Up Very Well”
Read the story posted on Nifty (Tommy Grows Up…Very Well) and have to say, bloody well done. Great bit of reading
there, definatly left me with a slightly sticky pair of boxers and a grin on my face. Well written, great tone, and
a little naughty…like all the good things in life.
Thanks for sharing,
Re. “Tom And I Begin” series
Greetings from New Zealand!
Man, there’s a lot of crap on nifty – i know this because i put some there myself. I dump most stories by the first
chapter, however, i keep going back because every now and then there’s a real gem in amongst the dross. I found one
this morning – an absolute gem.
I love your story – it’s about the most realistic true-beginnings story i’ve ever seen. A real gem. Also, it
reminded me very much of my own experience which began with a wandering hand during a school movie screening.
Thanks for sharing, you made my day!
Re. “A Day Of
Thank you for sharing your Vietnam story with the rest of us. It has the ring of truth and brought
back many memories of my time over there. I was a 1LT then CPT (I stayed for 2 consecutive tours) and even
then was a BDSM Master. I Topped Americans, Vietnamese and even an Aussie, everything from officers who
outranked me to enlisted grunts. Such memories, and yes every man had his own particular war (remember
Thanks again for sharing,
The Captain in Wyoming
You can write! Unlike 98% of those who contribute to
Nifty, you can write!
It’s so rare it’s a surprise to see.
Thank you for your story. I hope you have more.
Our world needs them.
I try to respond to all authors who write truly worthwhile reading material. And yours was just that,
keeping me interested for the entire story. Acknowledgement is the only payment we as writers who post on
Nifty get. Some stories on Nifty, like yours, are great. Others are mediocre while others are shit. Some
story I start to read and I’m gone after a few paragraphs. I mean I’m not a professional writer, but I
think I can string together coherent sentences and use spell check on my material.
Many of my stories are based on fact, but are changed to protect the innocent. If I don’t get any responses
to my stories I tend to end them after two or three chapters. Of course I’ve had a couple of computer
crashes since I started writing and have lost stories, so they don’t get finished. The story about the
Rangers got so much negative feedback from Rangers to include death threats that I terminated it, but
couldn’t get it removed from the archives.
Oh yes, as you are well aware showers and hot food were a luxury in Vietnam for grunts in the bush. I’ve
got one story that I’ve never published about my time growing up in the 60s before entering the Army that
is pretty accurate expect for names, dates and places. The working title is: Blue Collar Sex.
Maybe one of these days I’ll get up the nerve to publish it.
Again enjoy your work.
I was on Nifty this morning and took a second look at your story. You write that you were operating in the
Tay Ninh area. Let me see
now, back in 66 and 67 the 196th LIB was working that area as well as elements of the 25th ID. In
1967 the 173rd ABN jumped into the area to conduct combat ops.
I spent most of my time in Vietnam in the I Corps area. As for my 19
months on the ground as a grunt I remember more than once getting the early morning wake up to get my
people together for a new operation after one or two days stand down. I don’t remember ever getting a
full stand down. I do remember that Top always took care of us to make sure we had steak, ice cream
and beer for our first meal in from the bush.
Stand downs for my units were about every two or three months. One week a month we would spend doing palce
gaurd at a FSB/LZ, but most of the time we lived in the bush. Nasty living. I remember guys used to beg for
the million dollar wound. We never operated with a full squad, platoon or company, but manage to get the
Anyway great to read your story again.
I’ve just read your sad story, such a sad, sad waste of young lives, but I’m sure I’ve no need to tell you how that
feels, I live in Nr, Ireland, and my father was a soldier in the British army for 25 yrs, so anything I read about soldiers getting hurt affects me in
I’m utterly devastated at seeing day after day, young soldiers in coffins, being unloaded from the back of planes,
some as young as 18, who should be off having a good time with their friends and girlfriends, not fighting in some
foreign land, far from home, but they made the ultimate sacrifice and paid the price for us, all off us, and for
that I will be forever thankful.
God bless them, one and all.
Re. Breakup Breakdown
Great story. How about cont…
NICE story. Tender and yet hot at the same
Fun story. I wish I had a brother… 🙂
I enjoyed that story a lot. The blow job was just the correct answer – for both of them.
Do you have other stories posted on Nifty?
Re. A Good
I just finished reading “A Good Deed”, and really enjoyed it. I know it was a conclusive story, but it would be
great to let the guys spend one more night at the hotel, and for Jason to get a little more curious. They could be
snowed in at the hotel. But it was a great story either way.
Here’s a true story of mine, if u want to post it on 99 Gay. I’m going to
check out 99 right now.
How are you doing ? I would imagine getting flooded with emails since your story posted on Nifty ?
I just wanted to email you and tell you that I enjoyed your story. It was down to earth, truthful and of
course well written. I know your requirements for being posted and can see where that all comes into play, but
the story, itself is a great one. The way you wrote it too, was very nice and helped for an easy, smooth, and
well written story.
Hope you stay well and have a good Holiday.
Oh, and yes…….what else has happebed to both of you since then ?
hey i just wanted to stop in and say that i just finished your story
and it was AWESOME i cant wait to read the rest of the story 🙂
OH PLEASE continue with this story. You’ve written it well. The view point from the TOTAL hetero, best
understanding buddy with feelings and compassion is a winner. I’ve met SO many “str8” guys in my years that said
‘no way’, to only end up parallel to me…. snoring afterwards!
Some authors write a real juicy ‘part 1’ cliff hanger and don’t follow up. I’ve read some old old achieved stories
on Nifty that were wonderful only to be let down because the lazy ass writer didn’t f’n finish.
How can I have a dream about a potentially drippy relationship when there’s no written ending? I have enough
trouble conjuring up my own wet dreams, much less trying to finish someone elses.
And thank you that you’re a good speller (or use a spell checker) and use the right tense. BOY, some of the stories on Nifty are
rough and work my nerves. I can’t get in to the story because I’m always correcting grammar or some other
Re. Mark Hit The Pause Button series
FINALLY! The son reacted the way I would. I really hate these bestfriend/dad stories, but I guess morbid
curiosity draws me to them. In most of them, the son gets all horny and joins the action and everybody lives
happily ever after. No jealousy. No hurt feelings. The only difference between Mark and me is that I would have
jerked off watching and then promptly blown chunks. And then probably gone out and beat the shit out of Jordan. So
thanks for the well-written, realistic portrayal of this scenario. His dad is disgusting. Both for sleeping around
on his wife and especially for doing it with one of his son’s “friends.” Thanks.
Certainly enjoyed reading first chapter of your hot and horny story.
This was a beautiful story. The sparse dialogue captures the mood perfectly, immersing us all into the emotions
felt by the narrator during this uncontrollable situation. To think, so much could be said in the son’s last words
to his father. Of this I’m sure, those words will stay with me for a very long time.
I just read your posting on Nifty. It’s very hot. I rarely look at the incest page, but glad I did this morning.
Usually that theme doesn’t appeal to me but this one did. I wasn’t sure how that story was going to unfold, and I
hope you continue it. I’d like to read more about the earlier encounter with Jordan and how that happened too.
Very nice story — thanks! Like how dad and son can be loving
Re. Juan’s Other
I have just read your story on Nifty and want to first of all say I enjoyed the good read.
I’ve been writing man-erotic tales myself for the past ten years now and have my stories on a website I run
http://www.guyzstories.net That website began as a hobby but grew into
a network of sites which I now run with a small team of guys.
Re. Escaping My Roommate
really enjoyed your Escaping My Roommate story posted on Nifty! I really really enjoyed both installments
actually. It is so rare to read stories about first time experiences that can actually be real.
I’ve always wondered if the sauna situation really happens. I would love to read more by you!
Thanks for sharing!
Re. My Pledging Assignment
dude what an incredible story great job. your amazing.
from “What’s Up”
Nice. Captures the bathhouse setting and mood.
I’ll look forward to what comes next.
Thanks for the good read.
Great story. Please continue. I went to college and the thing I regret most is not pledging a fraternity. Many
of my business contacts have lots of friends and connections from their fraternity days. Too bad I don’t know
them better to ask questions of what they had to do to get in!
I have much enjoyed your 3-seg. story.
Although there was not the usual “The End”, I did sense completion. I also clearly
picked up much learning and valuing of new experiences. Would that all of us could be so open
to benefitting from our life experiences. Best wishes!
Re. Karl’s Deepest Secret
I’ve just started your story today, and have read the first two
chapters. I had to stop and write to let you know how much I like it, and how well written it
is. I realize there are 5 chapters posted so far, and I’ll be getting into the rest over the next
few days. But I was so carried away I had to stop and tell you.
Re. Let’s Do It Again
I’ve looked on the 99gay-men.us
web site and can’t find this story. I’m glad you
posted it to Nifty, but I’d like to find it on your web site, too. It’s a rather steamy story
. . . ! I just
finished Chapter 5. Sounds like maybe a bit of romance may be building for Tyler & Rich. I’m a
sucker for romance, if you’ll pardon a terrible pun.
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publish material on this site that is not deemed suitable for them by the search
I just wanted to write and tell you what a good story you have going. The way the two
guys interact is very much live high school, particularly considering the age differences. And the way you
describe their sexuality, both their thoughts about sex as well as what they do, is very true-to-life too.
You have a sense of humor about sex that is lacking in a lot of stories. Yeah,
guys get crushes on other guys and it’s hot to be with someone you really admire, but it’s about
getting off, sharing sex, the pleasure of being together. Then we go out and shoot baskets! And then
we have sex again!!
Thanks for writing. I hope you write a lot more!
Wow…loved this series…do you think you’ll continue it?
Just a quick note to say that I am enjoying your latest outrageous sexy romp. Crawford is a pretty
precocious 14-year-old, I would say. 🙂
just able to read a good story today..it’s
Just to let you know that I am
enjoying this story.
The characters seem pretty well drawn and about the right level of maturity for their age. They also seem
quite modern; not out but not incredibly repressed. It seems about right for the times.
So I am looking forward to more instalments.
I just finished reading the first 5
chapters of this story. WOW, it is a really great story. You certainly have a talent for writing that made
me feel that I was there watching. I got so horny and turned on, […Portion inappropriate for
this site…]. I’m 19 and in college now, and I wish that I could find a Tyler or a Rich, or
even Alan. When I was in high school, my best friend was a really hot and well built guy, and I loved
looking at him in the showers after PE. I only saw him hard once, which was when we went on a Boy Scout
camping weekend and we shared the same tent. […Portion inappropriate for this
site…] We would sometimes talk about girls, and how we got a girls bra and blouse off
and fondled and sucked their nipples, but neither of us would ever admit that we had never fucked a girl. I
think it was mostly guys bragging about things that never happened, because I never did that to a girl, and
I never had a girl friend in high school or now. My friend never dated much either, and so I wonder now if
we had many missed opportunities of sex together, if only one of us had ever had the nerve to ease into the
subject or take a chance on touching the other.
The truth is, I am very masculine looking, and a long way from looking ugly, but I have never been with a
guy for sex. I am really at a loss of how to know if someone is interested, or are there signs or signals
for that. I know that I could go to a park or cruise place, but the thought of a total stranger in those
places is scary to me. I would like to meet someone near my age, and over time have a relationship. Can you
offer any suggestions? If you dont mind, how old are you? I hope to hear from you.
Thanks for this great story, and I’m anxious for more chapters. The way in which you invilved Rich, Tyler
and Alan was great. It seemed like such a natural outcome, not far fectched as some stories are written.
Very nice story Greg. Thanks for sharing your
work. If you have an email list, please add me.
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Hey I love the story so far. It’s so amazing how much the story
has in common with my sophomore year. It’s like your able to just pull me into the story and especially my
emotions. You are a very good writer and your editor does a good job as well. I’m just hoping to read more
I just wanted to write and tell you what a good story you have going. The way the two guys interact is very much
live high school, particularly considering the age differences. And the way you describe their sexuality, both
their thoughts about sex as well as what they do, is very true-to-life too. You have a sense of humor about sex that is lacking in a lot of stories. Yeah, guys get crushes
on other guys and it’s hot to be with someone you really admire, but it’s about getting off, sharing sex, the
pleasure of being together. Then we go out and shoot baskets! And then we have sex again!!
Thanks for writing. I hope you write a lot more!
Yes. I love
it. A great story and I thank you for sharing it. Your work is very much appreciated and I await the
Just a quick thank you for a really horny story.
Great to read one that is well written as well, doubling the pleasure.
Wonderful story, I was drawn in from chapter one. So few stories make me feel as though I’m
reading about real people but I can just envision these three boys as your typical teenage boys in any
town across the U.S. Hope the story continues. Thanks so much for sharing.
Re. An Extra Year In The Dorm
Awesome story! Can’t wait for the next
chapter! Maybe Jim will have sex with Brad!
Greg, LOL, you drop a bombshell about Brad and Jim, and
then move on to the story of Juan and Jim, with more about them
than about Brad. Man, you’re driving me crazy, LOL. Do the guys fuck or not? You’re prolonging the suspense
– on both stories (g). But I suppose that’s the trait of a good writer. I’ll keep waiting, but not very
F***ing good. Keep writing.
Have just finished reading ‘An Extra Year In The Dorm‘ and would love
to added to a mailing list for the story if possible.
Looking forward to your next update,
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I just finished all your chapters of your story on Nifty. I just wanted to write to tell you what a great story
it is and what a terrific writer you are. The story is well-written, articulate, your characters all have depth
and it’s an all around fantastic story!
(I especially like
I’m looking forward to the next chapter!
That was a great chapter. Your description of Juan and Brad is exactly “my
type” of guy as well.
Thanks for another great episode…can’t wait for more.
Wanted to write and tell you how much I enjoyed An Extra Year in the Dorm and that I can’t wait for more.
Also happy to see the website and that it’s run out of Milwaukee. I’m from Wisconsin as well.
Will be watching for the next chapter.
The plot thickens. Brad looks like he might be a great
“companion” for Jim.
I could really relate to the description of licking an armpit. Even in my 50s, I’m still very sensitive, even
ticklish, all over. That kind of thing just drives me wild. One time recently, I was with a guy who
spent over an hour just tickling and caressing me in every erogenous spot he could find (which wasn’t hard to
do!). At the end, I felt like I had had about 5 orgasms.
Anyway, good work and I look forward to the next chapter.
Just finished ch 3 of An Extra
Year In The Dorm… What a great start you have going!!!! Hope you continue
it!!!! Please keep on with the story, its wonderful!!!!! Want to hear how things go with Adam,
hopefully better than they sit now!!! And if he and roommate hook
Greg, this story has definitely touched a nerve with me. First, it
is very well-written. As a literary editor, I find myself checking such details as I read, and I also serve
as an editor/proof reader for a number writers on the Nifty site. Second, it brings back memories of my own
personal experiences with teen friends so many years ago – I am now well-beyond those years, but I never came
out. Editor’s Note: This is continued in the article Married But
Another fine hot and horny
Just needed to write and tell you how much I appreciated this story. I like your slow build to a relationship
and the ultimate bonding.
I just purchased The Lavender Line after reading
Just a quick thank you for the first two parts of your story. I look forward to the next ones.
It’s great to read a story that promises so much on the sex side without ramming it down your throat in the first
Almost as satisfying is reading a story that has great composition, grammatically correct and spelling that looks
Thank you for that beautifully and sensitively written story. I’ve read parts 1 & 2 on Nifty, and hope that
I really enjoyed that story a lot. I was asked to actually to the same thing my sophomore year in
college. Be a roomy to a freshman. But he wasn’t gay, but he was REALLY
I saw “Extra Year in the Dorm”
posted when I looked today.
Seems to me this incoming freshman’s religious parents would have a litter of kittens if they found out the
proposed roommate/mentor was gay.
Re. Various stories
Greetings from downunder
Hope the weather is treating you well by now. We are enjoying our summer with temperatures of
about 24 max at the moment but it can climb to 40-41 when it gets into a bad mood.
Anyway, please may I rave on for a minute or two about your great stories. A Day of Rest was a
real teaser. Having a military background I could relate to your story although I did not serve
in SVN. Was there any sequal to that story/
My problem today that i would like to seek your help with concerns Tom and I Begin. I have
downloaded chapters 1,2 and 3 but when I went to read them last night found that
chapter 1 has been overprinted on an old page and cannot
be read. Please can you tell me where I found it, was it on Nifty or 99Gay-Men becaue I
cannot find them on either site. Chapters 2 and 3 are fine but don’t want to satrt reading
them until i have read Ch 1
I have been reading some of your other stories and love your writing stsyle. Where do you
normally post your stopries, on 99Gay-Men or Nifty or somewhere else?
Please keep up the good work.
Cheers from OZ
Overnight I also read A Good Deed and Breakup Breakdown. I just love your literary style, your papers are so enjoyable. If you can direct me to any
others you have written, please do.
Our TV has some very cold picyures of USA at present, hope you are not personally being affected too much. It
will be 37 here tomorrow
You are one hell of an erotic story-teller!!! I love your work.
Just finished your first chapter and hoping that there will be many
Haven’t heard of the Lavender
Line — are they on
Nifty /under college?Or can I find them under Prolific
I’ve enjoyed several of your stories, they
all better than most; but can’t remember the titles, as I
usually read at least a story a day
times three years on the computer! You can do the
Per usual, thanks for the good reading.
I was just checking to see that my own story in
the college section (Justin & Billy) had posted OK and decided to read yours that was right
beside it. I’m so glad I did.
I find a lot of the writing on these sites is really second-rate or even worse. But you have such obvious
talent I read both chapters back to back. Great reading and of course you kept me hard the whole time. I
think a story that does both is what my kind of writing and reading is all about.
Anyway, thanks for writing and I look forward to lots more of your story. What other stories have you
written that I should read?
Greg, I was
glad to come upon your latest (for me) story. As with
the others I have read, it is both interesting and well written. Like them as well, I want to
cool..keep writing buddy…